Cách trả lời "Is money the only measure of success in your country?" IELTS SPEAKING PART 3

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No, in my country, we don't view money as the sole measure of success. While financial stability is undoubtedly important, there is a broader understanding of success that encompasses various aspects of life.

• Main idea 1:  Success can be measured by the positive impact one has on others or on societal issues.
  • Supporting idea:  In my country, philanthropy, community involvement, and making a difference in the lives of others are often considered as indicators of success.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Example: In my country, individuals like my sister - Sarah, a successful entrepreneur who actively engages in philanthropy and community projects, exemplify how success is measured by the positive impact one has on others and societal issues rather than solely by financial achievements.
• Main idea 2: The importance of work-life balance is emphasized, and individuals are encouraged to prioritize their well-being, family, and personal happiness alongside their professional pursuits. 
  • Supporting idea: Prioritizing work-life balance helps individuals maintain physical and mental health, reducing the risk of burnout and stress-related illnesses.