Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề 🔥"Describe a noisy place you have been to": Bài mẫu kèm từ vựng

Describe a noisy place you have been to
You should say:

• What it is
• When you wnet there
• What you did there
• And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

• What it is
  • I’m going to talk about when my neighbour made a lot of noise when he renovated his house a few months ago >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ago, for, before" tiếng anh 
• When you went there + What you did there
  • It’s my home, so I stayed there nearly all the time
  • The noise of the drills, hammers and other power tools during the daytime was really annoying (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When I stay at home, I can hear the construction noise like the hammer banging, the drilling sounds, very irritating)
  • During this time I felt extremely exhausted and I really wanted to make a complaint so that my neighbour would take some actions but his house renovations were legal so there was nothing I could do
• And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place
  • Main idea 1: Hearing the noise all the time drove me crazy, and had quite a negative impact on my work.
    • Supporting idea: Sometimes I was sleepless all night >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic SLEEP IELTS SPEAKING
  • Main idea 2: These impacts contributed to my negative mental, physical and behavioral manifestations.
    • Supporting idea: In this noisy environment, I got more easily annoyed and became more prone to losing their temper >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Cách dùng từ "environment" tiếng anh 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Well, let me tell you about a rather noisy experience I had a few months ago when my neighbor decided to renovate his house. It was quite a disruptive period for me.

So, when my neighbor began his renovations a few months back, it felt like a constant onslaught of noise pollution invading my home. Living next door, I practically spent all my time there, and let me tell you, it wasn't peaceful.

During the daytime, the relentless sounds of drills, hammers, and other power tools echoed through the walls, making it nearly impossible to focus on anything. It was like a symphony of construction chaos, and it was incredibly irritating.

As you can imagine, trying to concentrate on work or even just getting a good night's sleep became a Herculean task. The incessant racket left me feeling utterly exhausted, and at times, I found myself lying awake into the early hours of the morning.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing

Despite my frustration, there wasn't much I could do about it. It turns out that my neighbor's renovations were all above board, completely legal. So, I had no choice but to endure the noise pollution until the renovations were complete.

Living in such a noisy environment took a toll on me in various ways. Firstly, the constant racket had a detrimental effect on my work. It was incredibly challenging to maintain focus and productivity with the incessant background noise. And let me tell you, losing sleep night after night didn't help matters either.

Moreover, the noise pollution also had a negative impact on my mental and emotional well-being. In such a chaotic environment, I found myself becoming more easily agitated and prone to outbursts of frustration. It was like the constant assault on my senses was wearing me down, both mentally and physically.

Overall, living next to a construction site was a noisy nightmare that I wouldn't wish upon anyone. It disrupted my life in more ways than one, affecting my work, my sleep, and my overall well-being. Needless to say, I was relieved when the renovations finally came to an end, and peace and quiet were restored to my home.

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Describe a noisy place you have been to

• What it is
  • During my trip to my hometown on Tet Holiday, there was a place that left a lasting impression of noise in my memory – my neighbor's house, where they often had karaoke sessions.
• When you went there
  • Last January, my family and I visited my hometown to celebrate Tet Holiday, a special time for relaxation and cherishing moments with our loved ones. As part of our trip, we decided to visit our grandparents and spend time together.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
• And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place
  • There are numerous reasons for why I perceive it as a noisy location.
    • FIRSTLY, while we were sleeping, we were suddenly awoken by the booming sound of karaoke coming from their house. Initially, I hoped they would sing for a short while and stop before 10 p.m., but to my disappointment, they continued non-stop. They even sang the same song, "Gánh Mẹ," louder and louder.
    • SECONDLY, Feeling increasingly agitated, I couldn't remain composed any longer, so we decided to visit their house and express our complaints about the disturbance. Thankfully, they understood our concerns and adjusted the volume, making it more bearable for everyone in the neighborhood.

1. Do you think it is good for children to make noise?

Yes, it can be beneficial for children to make noise because it is a natural part of their growth and development. Noise-making helps children express their emotions and creativity, which are essential for their mental health. For instance, a child might shout joyfully while playing a game, which allows them to explore social dynamics. Moreover, making noise fosters their ability to socialize, as it often occurs during group activities. For example, children singing together during a school activity learn teamwork and coordination. However, it’s important to teach them about respecting boundaries to avoid being disruptive. Parents can set rules like keeping the noise level low at night to respect others' peace. This approach helps maintain a balance between their freedom of expression and consideration for others.

• Beneficial (adj): có lợi, hữu ích
• Noise-making (n): việc làm ồn
• Socialize (v): giao tiếp xã hội

2. Should children not be allowed to make noise under any circumstances?

No, children should not be forbidden from making noise in all situations, as it is crucial for their natural growth. Prohibiting all noise might stifle their creativity and self-expression, which could lead to social and emotional challenges later. For example, children practicing a musical instrument might need to be noisy while learning. On the other hand, there are contexts where noise must be managed, such as in sacred places like temples or during school lessons. In these cases, teaching children to respect these settings instills discipline and empathy. For instance, explaining to a child why silence is required in a library can help them learn to adjust their behavior appropriately. Striking this balance between freedom and responsibility prepares them for social interactions in adulthood.

• Stifle (v): kiềm hãm, làm tê liệt
• Sacred places (n): nơi linh thiêng

3. Which do you think makes louder noise, cities or the countryside?

Cities undoubtedly generate louder noise due to the hustle and bustle of urban life. With constant traffic, construction activities, and the presence of large crowds, the noise level in cities is significantly higher. For example, car horns and machinery in big cities like Hanoi can be overwhelming. In contrast, the countryside tends to be tranquil and peaceful, with minimal noise sources. The sounds of birds chirping or a gentle breeze are common in rural areas, creating a more serene environment. This stark difference highlights how urban and rural settings impact people’s auditory experiences. People living in cities often adapt to the cacophony, while those in the countryside enjoy the calm.

• Hustle and bustle (idiom): sự hối hả và nhộn nhịp
• Tranquil (adj): yên bình, thanh tịnh
• Cacophony (n): tiếng ồn lộn xộn

4. What types of noise do you come across in daily life?

In my daily life, I encounter a variety of noises, each stemming from different sources. Traffic noises, like honking horns and the rumble of motorbikes, are the most common in my city. Additionally, construction sounds such as jackhammers or cranes operating can be very disruptive. For instance, a new building being constructed near my house adds to the noise pollution. Electronic devices like ringing phones or the buzz of notifications also create a constant background sound. At home, the hum of appliances such as refrigerators or the sound of people chatting in the kitchen are typical. These noises often merge into a cacophony, making quiet moments rare and precious.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

• Jackhammer (n): máy khoan bê tông
• Cacophony (n): tiếng ồn lộn xộn

5. How do people respond to noises in your country?

People in my country respond to noise based on their environment and tolerance levels. In urban areas, people are often desensitized to noise and see it as a part of city life. For example, commuters on busy streets in Ho Chi Minh City rarely complain about honking horns. However, in quieter residential areas, excessive noise like loud music might lead to confrontations or complaints. In some cases, neighbors might politely request the volume to be lowered, reflecting the cultural norm of avoiding conflict. On the other hand, during traditional celebrations like Lunar New Year, even loud noises like firecrackers are embraced as part of the festive atmosphere. These varied reactions show how context and culture influence attitudes towards noise.

• Desensitized (adj): quen với, không còn nhạy cảm
• Confrontations (n): sự đối đầu, tranh cãi
• Embrace (v): chấp nhận, đón nhận

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