"Describe something you own that you want to replace"IELTS SPEAKING PART 2,3: Bài mẫu kèm từ vựng ​

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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "Describe something you own that you want to replace"IELTS SPEAKING PART 2,3: Bài mẫu kèm từ vựng ​

I. Đề bài

Describe something you own that you want to replace
You should say:

  • What it is
  • Where it is
  • How you got it
  • And explain why you want to replace it

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

  • What it is + Where it is + How you got it
    • Well, I currently own a cozy apartment nestled in the heart of the city, situated in a bustling area with all the conveniences conveniently within reach.
    • Now that I've become a parent to a beautiful baby, my priorities have shifted. The apartment, though comfortable, feels a bit cramped with all the baby gear and necessities. 
    • That's why I've been considering replacing the apartment with a spacious landed house in the city center.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • And explain why you want to replace it
      • Main idea 1: A landed house would offer us more room to spread out, a backyard for the little one to play in, and perhaps even a garden where we can relax and unwind. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • With a backyard, our little one would have a safe and accessible outdoor space to play and explore, fostering their physical and imaginative development while enjoying the fresh air. 
          • The possibility of having a garden adds an extra dimension to our living environment, offering a tranquil oasis where we can relax, unwind, and cultivate a connection with nature amidst the bustling city life.
      • Main idea 2: Additionally, a landed house offers the potential for customization and personalization, allowing us to create a home tailored to our family's unique preferences and lifestyle.
        • Supporting idea: This flexibility can enhance our sense of belonging and comfort, creating a truly personalized sanctuary where we can thrive and create lasting memories together.
        • Example: We might incorporate a cozy reading nook or a spacious backyard play area, fostering a love for learning and outdoor exploration from an early age. Such personalized touches would not only enhance our daily lives but also contribute to a warm and inviting atmosphere that reflects our family's values and aspirations.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Today, I would like to tell you about my current living situation and why I am considering replacing it with a spacious landed house in the city center.

Currently, I reside in a cozy apartment nestled in the heart of the city. It's situated in a bustling area, which offers all the conveniences conveniently within reach. However, with the recent addition of a beautiful baby to our family, my priorities have shifted.

Firstly, our apartment, though comfortable, feels a bit cramped with all the baby gear and necessities. As a result, we've been contemplating the idea of upgrading to a spacious landed house.

A landed house would offer us more room to spread out. It could provide a backyard for the little one to play in and perhaps even a garden where we can relax and unwind. Imagine having a safe and accessible outdoor space where our little one can play and explore, fostering their physical and imaginative development while enjoying the fresh air. Moreover, the possibility of having a garden adds an extra dimension to our living environment, offering a tranquil oasis amidst the bustling city life.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Additionally, a landed house offers the potential for customization and personalization, allowing us to create a home tailored to our family's unique preferences and lifestyle. This flexibility can enhance our sense of belonging and comfort, creating a truly personalized sanctuary where we can thrive and create lasting memories together.

For instance, we might incorporate a cozy reading nook or a spacious backyard play area, fostering a love for learning and outdoor exploration from an early age. Such personalized touches would not only enhance our daily lives but also contribute to a warm and inviting atmosphere that reflects our family's values and aspirations.

Overall, while our current apartment has served us well, the prospect of upgrading to a spacious landed house in the city center holds great appeal. It would provide us with the space, freedom, and opportunity for customization that we desire as a growing family.

 

IV. Part 3

1. Does consumption have any impact on the environment?

Yes, consumption significantly impacts the environment.

  • Main idea 1: Producing goods requires the extraction of natural resources, such as deforestation for raw materials or mining for metals.
    • Example: For instance, large-scale logging for furniture production depletes forests and disrupts ecosystems.
  • Main idea 2: Disposing of products often leads to pollution and waste, such as plastic ending up in oceans or landfills.
    • Example: A UN study found that 300 million tons of plastic waste are generated annually, contributing to environmental degradation.

2. Why do people always want to buy new things to replace old ones?

People desire new items due to various reasons.

  • Main idea 1: Technological advancements make old products obsolete, prompting people to upgrade for better performance.
    • Example: Smartphones are regularly replaced as new models offer faster processors and better cameras.
  • Main idea 2: Marketing and societal trends encourage the idea that owning the latest items signifies success or modernity.
    • Example: Advertising campaigns for fashion brands promote seasonal trends, making consumers feel outdated with older styles.

3. Why do some people like to buy expensive things?

Buying expensive items fulfills personal and social needs.

  • Main idea 1: Some people value high-quality and durable products that justify their higher prices.
  • Main idea 2: Expensive goods serve as a status symbol to showcase wealth and success.
    • Example: Purchasing a designer handbag like Louis Vuitton often reflects a person’s social standing.

4. Why do some people prefer to buy things in the supermarket rather than online?

Supermarkets provide distinct advantages for shoppers.

  • Main idea 1: Customers can physically inspect items, ensuring quality before purchasing.
    • Example: Fruits and vegetables are often chosen based on their freshness and appearance.
  • Main idea 2: Immediate access to products eliminates waiting times and shipping fees associated with online shopping.
    • Example: Someone needing milk or bread can buy it instantly at a supermarket rather than waiting days for delivery.
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