Bên cạnh hướng dẫn em cách phân tích đề thi cùng đính kèm bài sửa bài viết của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đi thi hôm đấy và mới nhận kết quả thi 5.5 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"Describe a new law that you want to implement in your country" IELTS SPEAKING
I. Đề bài
Describe a new law that you want to implement in your country
You should say:
- What law it is
- What changes this law has
- Whether this new law will be popular
- And explain how you came up with the idea of this law
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic Rules / laws & court IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
- What law it is
- The proposed law is a strict regulation regarding alcohol consumption while operating vehicles.
- Under this law, individuals caught driving under the influence of alcohol, regardless of the amount consumed, would face severe consequences, including a death sentence upon repeat offenses.
- What changes this law has
- The changes this law would bring are significant.
- Firstly, it aims to drastically reduce the number of accidents and fatalities caused by drunk driving.
- Additionally, it would foster a safer road environment, instilling a sense of responsibility among drivers to abstain from alcohol when behind the wheel.
- The changes this law would bring are significant.
- Whether this new law will be popular
- As for its popularity, opinions may vary widely. While some segments of society would likely support such stringent measures due to their potential to save lives and prevent accidents, others might argue that the punishment is too harsh. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- And explain how you came up with the idea of this law
- Main idea 1: The idea for this law stems from a recognition of the devastating consequences of drunk driving.
- Supporting idea: Every year, countless lives are lost, families shattered, and communities impacted by the reckless actions of individuals who choose to drink and drive.
- Main idea 2: By taking a hardline stance against this behavior, the hope is to create a safer society where the risk of such tragedies is significantly reduced.
- Supporting idea: The severity of the penalty underscores the gravity of the offense and emphasizes the importance of prioritizing public safety on our roads.
- Main idea 1: The idea for this law stems from a recognition of the devastating consequences of drunk driving.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Well, the proposed law I'm going to talk about today is a rather stringent regulation concerning alcohol consumption while operating vehicles. This law suggests that individuals caught driving under the influence of alcohol, no matter the quantity consumed, would confront severe consequences, including a death sentence upon repeat offenses.
Now, moving on to the changes this law would enact, they are quite significant. Firstly, it aims to dramatically diminish the number of accidents and fatalities caused by drunk driving. Additionally, it seeks to foster a safer road environment, instilling a sense of responsibility among drivers to refrain from alcohol consumption when behind the wheel.
As for the popularity of this new law, opinions may diverge widely. While certain segments of society might be inclined to support such stringent measures due to their potential to save lives and prevent accidents, others might argue that the punishment is overly harsh.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
Now, let me shed some light on how this idea for the law came about. Firstly, it stemmed from a recognition of the devastating consequences of drunk driving. Every year, numerous lives are lost, families shattered, and communities impacted by the reckless actions of individuals who choose to drink and drive. Moreover, by taking a hardline stance against this behavior, the hope is to create a safer society where the risk of such tragedies is significantly reduced. The severity of the penalty underscores the gravity of the offense and emphasizes the importance of prioritizing public safety on our roads.
That concludes my talk about the proposed law regarding alcohol consumption while operating vehicles.
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