Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe a place you visited that has been affected by air pollution (or not clean)
I. Đề bài
Describe a place you visited that has been affected by air pollution (or not clean)
You should say:
- Where it is
- When you visited this place
- What kinds of pollution you saw there
- And explain how this place was affected
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
- Where it is + When you visited this place
- I would like to share with you a situation when I visited a famous tourist destination but was disappointed to see plastic waste there. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: I’d like to share with you a time I saw plastic waste piling up on a beach)
- …. This is a world-renowned tourist attraction point where people often go for vacations and water sports.
- What kinds of pollution you saw there
- We felt terrible as there was loads of litter here and there especially when we approached the river where the water sports activities had been done.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
- And explain how this place was affected
- Main idea 1: The main reason for this problem is many tourists visit this place every day and often carry packed food and water bottles and dump these things carelessly.
- Supporting idea:
- I never imagined the beach on the paradisiacal island should feature not shells, but rather, plastic trash. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "not...but rather..." tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: The second main reason I got to know from the local is that there are no plastic recycling plants nearby, so it is a big issue how to dump all the litter. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "local" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: Although it is a popular tourist place, I was shocked to see there was no rule and regulation in terms of the cleaning process.
- Main idea 1: The main reason for this problem is many tourists visit this place every day and often carry packed food and water bottles and dump these things carelessly.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
I'd like to recount a recent visit to a renowned tourist destination that left me disheartened due to the extensive presence of plastic waste. The place I'm referring to is a globally acclaimed spot frequented by vacationers and water sports enthusiasts.
It was during a trip last summer that I had the opportunity to visit this location. The moment we arrived, I was immediately struck by the sheer beauty of the surroundings. However, as we ventured closer to the river where water activities took place, my initial awe quickly turned to disappointment.
The types of pollution we encountered ranged from plastic bags and bottles to various other discarded items. It was disheartening to witness such negligence towards the environment in a place that should have been a haven of natural beauty.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
Upon further inquiry, I learned about the underlying causes contributing to this environmental degradation. Firstly, the influx of tourists who visit this destination daily is a major factor. Many of these visitors come prepared with packed food and water bottles, which they often dispose of carelessly, exacerbating the pollution problem.
Moreover, it became apparent that the lack of nearby recycling facilities compounded the issue. Without proper infrastructure in place for waste management, the accumulation of plastic waste becomes an insurmountable challenge.
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