Phân tích đề "Describe a time when someone apologised to you" IELTS SPEAKING

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "Describe a time when someone apologised to you" IELTS SPEAKING

Describe a time when someone apologised to you
You should say:

• Who apologised you and When
• Why they apologised
• And explain how did you felt after they apologised

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

• Who apologised you and When
  • Recently, just a few weeks ago, my husband apologized to me after an incident where he yelled at me.
• Why they apologised
  • On a regular evening at home, amidst the usual routine, a minor disagreement unexpectedly escalated, leading to my husband losing his temper and uttering hurtful and unwarranted words.
  • He raised his voice and said things that were hurtful and unnecessary. In that moment, I felt shocked and deeply hurt by his words and tone.
  • However, shortly after the incident, my husband realized his mistake and came to me to apologize. He acknowledged that his behavior was unacceptable and expressed genuine remorse for his actions. He explained that he was under a lot of stress from work and personal matters, but he understood that it was not an excuse for taking it out on me.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
• And explain how did you felt after they apologised
  • After he apologized, I felt a mixture of emotions. 
    • Main idea 1:  On one hand, I appreciated his sincerity and felt relieved that he recognized his mistake. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • It showed that he valued our relationship and was willing to take responsibility for his actions. 
        • It also demonstrated his commitment to treating me with respect and kindness, even in moments of frustration.
    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, I still felt hurt by his words and needed some time to process everything. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • However, his apology opened the door for us to have an honest conversation about our feelings and how we can better communicate with each other in the future.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Recently, just a few weeks ago, my husband apologized to me after an incident where he yelled at me.

It was a typical evening at home, amidst the usual routine, when a minor disagreement unexpectedly escalated, leading to my husband losing his temper and uttering hurtful and unwarranted words. He raised his voice and said things that were hurtful and unnecessary. In that moment, I felt shocked and deeply hurt by his words and tone.

However, shortly after the incident, my husband realized his mistake and came to me to apologize. He acknowledged that his behavior was unacceptable and expressed genuine remorse for his actions. He explained that he was under a lot of stress from work and personal matters, but he understood that it was not an excuse for taking it out on me.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing

After he apologized, I felt a mixture of emotions. On one hand, I appreciated his sincerity and felt relieved that he recognized his mistake. It showed that he valued our relationship and was willing to take responsibility for his actions. It also demonstrated his commitment to treating me with respect and kindness, even in moments of frustration. On the other hand, I still felt hurt by his words and needed some time to process everything. However, his apology opened the door for us to have an honest conversation about our feelings and how we can better communicate with each other in the future.

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