Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe an advertisement you don't like
I. Đề bài
Describe an advertisement you don't like
You should say:
What type of advertisement it is
What product or service it advertises
Where and when you first saw it
And explain why you don’t like it
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
1. Bài tham khảo số 1
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- What type of advertisement it is + What product or service it advertises
- Recently there are a slew of advertisements about medicines on FACEBOOK & YOUTUBE that purport to cure all.
- Where and when you first saw it
- I recently saw these ads while scrolling through my social media feed.
- It was the middle of the day, and I was on break from work and checking my Facebook page.
- And explain why you don’t like it
- Main idea 1: To me they are nothing but snake oil that tricks people into wasting their money.
- Supporting idea:
- These ads were making false promises and exaggerating the effects of their product
- They rely on exaggerated claims and unrealistic expectations to trick viewers into purchasing a product with little to no scientific backing. These products often lead to disappointment and wasted money for consumers.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: I can’t stand these advertisements that tend to be too direct or even offensive.
- Supporting idea:
- Most of the time those adverts that I saw on social media are just scams, featuring useless items or services or even exaggerating the efficacy of them. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng trạng từ "most of the time" tiếng anh
- The heavily edited before-and-after pictures and glowing testimonials seemed too good to be true
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: To me they are nothing but snake oil that tricks people into wasting their money.
2. Bài tham khảo số 2
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Describe an advertisement you don't like
- What type of advertisement it is
- Today, I would like to describe an advertisement that I find quite annoying while watching television.
- It is a TV commercial for a weight loss product.
- What product or service it advertises
- The advertisement shows the viewers "before and after" images of people who have used their product and lost a significant amount of weight.
- And explain why you don’t like it
- THERE ARE MANY REASONS WHY I DETEST THIS AD:
- FIRSTLY, upon further research on the internet, I was disappointed to find that the product may have detrimental effects on our health in the long term. It could potentially lead to serious health issues such as cancer or cardiovascular problems due to the side effects of the ingredients contained in these supplements. TO MAKE MATTERS WORSE, there are concerns about the possibility of sudden strokes.
- SECONDLY, I believe that losing weight requires a balanced diet, regular exercise, and sustainable lifestyle changes. The idea of "quick fixes" for weight loss seems unrealistic and deceptive.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- THERE ARE MANY REASONS WHY I DETEST THIS AD:
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