Bên cạnh hướng dẫn Phân tích đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 WRITING TASK 1 (map)"The plans show a school library 5 years ago and the same library now"(kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "Describe something healthy you enjoy doing." IELTS SPEAKING PART 2.
I. Đề bài
Describe something healthy you enjoy doing.
You should say:
- what you do
- where you do it
- who you do it with
and explain why you think doing this is healthy.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- what the change was about
- I used to be addicted to junk food, which is pretty oily and greasy, but recently I have changed my diet pattern with more vegetables/more home-made food/more organic food
- when it happened
- It was 2 years ago when I was browsing through some sites about health and came across a life-changing article on the official website of the ministry of medicine. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ"article"tiếng anh
- describe details of the change happened
- Miraculously, that article explained to me that it was not recommended to eat too much meat and too little fiber in my diet
- and describe how it affected you later in life.
- Main idea 1: It is surely beneficial for my cardiovascular system and reduces stress
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- Main idea 2: I have started being mentally fit along with physical fitness (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: I am now physically and mentally fit)
- Supporting idea: When I started consuming a healthy diet comprising dairy products, fresh fruits and green vegetables, It has helped me get out of the exhaustive phase and improved my concentration levels) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Mạo từ (article) trong tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea 1: It is surely beneficial for my cardiovascular system and reduces stress
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm cách triển khai khác nếu đang muốn nói đến việc going to the gym
- Undoubtedly, this change really does do wonders for me (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: To be honest, I have to say that changing my lifestyle is not easy at all. At first, I was extremely stressful and uncomfortable. But later on, as knowing how to balance between work and life, I found out that it’s really beneficial for me)
- Main idea 1: Firstly, as going to the gym is a stress buster, my health is highly boosted
- Support: Exercising helps me burn fat and sleep easier, which makes me feel energetic and refreshed, getting ready for a productive day.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- For example: In the past, when I didn't do proper exercises, I always felt sleepy, tired, and my body was always in pain. After joining the gym, my body is stronger and fitter, and I also feel a lot more confident.
- Main idea 2: Secondly, this helps practice my discipline.
- Support: To be honest, after understanding how to control time more strictly, I realised that back then I wasted too much time just to figure out what I should do, and ended up giving up before I could start. Therefore, I always remind myself that time is gold and I am no longer procrastinating anything.
- Main idea 1: Firstly, as going to the gym is a stress buster, my health is highly boosted
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