Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪ A ĐẾN Z CÁCH PHÂN TÍCH TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING VIỆT NAM (kèm bài được sửa của học sinh đạt 6.5 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Talk about a time when you gave advice to someone
I. Đề bài
Talk about a time when you gave advice to someone
You should say
Who you gave advice to?
What the advice was?
Why you gave the advice?
And how you felt about the advice?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Who you gave advice to?
- Well, the person who received my advice was Lam, who is my closest friend in my bachelor’s program
- What the advice was?
Speaking of the advice I gave him, it was about how to improve his job application documents such as CV and cover letter. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
More specifically, I suggested Lam that he should remove unnecessary details such as marital status, add more relevant skills and qualifications, and put the most important ones on the top of the CV to polish his strengths and relevance. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "suggest" tiếng anh
- Why you gave the advice?
- Regarding the reasons why I advised Lam, he was in a desperately frustrating situation at that time for the reason that he had applied to many vacancies, but all of his applications were rejected.
And how you felt about the advice?
- My feelings about the advice I gave him changed a lot during the application process.
- At the beginning, I simply sympathized with his circumstance, so I proposed that I could give him some help to improve the success rate. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "so" tiếng anh
- After that, after checking the job requirements and his CV, I found several issues with his applications, so I had a firm belief that my advice would definitely benefit his result
- Finally, the fact that he was offered an official contract from a prestigious multinational company motivated me, and I felt totally satisfied because our efforts have been paid off.
Nếu mình lựa chọn lời khuyên về tình cảm của mình dành cho bạn mình, IELTS TUTOR gợi ý triển khai câu cuối như sau:
- Main idea 1: Feel proud of myself
- Supporting idea: Because I helped my friend make the right choice. If she still continued with her ex, maybe she would suffer from stress or anxiety, which could deteriorate her health>> Tham khảo HƯỚNG DẪN TỪ A ĐẾN Z CÁCH PHÂN TÍCH TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING VIỆT NAM (kèm bài được sửa của học sinh đạt 6.5 đi thi thật)
- Main idea 2: Feel that I have done the right thing:
- Supporting idea: best friend has a good and happy life with her husband at the moment and our friendship is getting closer.
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