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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe an important stage in your life.
I. Đề bài
- Describe an important stage in your life.
- You should say:
- How old you were
- Where you were living at the time
- What you were doing during this stage
- And explain why you think this was an important stage in your life
- You should say:
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
- How old you were
- One of the most important times in my life was when I was sixteen.
- Where you were living at the time
- I was in high school in a small town, and I was kind of a shy teenager and only had one friend who was very close to me, and we did everything together. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "teenager" tiếng anh
- What you were doing during this stage
- We would often go to each other’s house for sleepovers (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: bữa tiệc qua đêm) and would stay up late at night chatting about everything two teenagers could ever chat about.
- We were best friend until one day when we had a terrible misunderstanding when she thought I had told someone a secret that she had told me, and she decided not to be my friend anymore
- And explain why you think this was an important stage in your life
- Main idea 1: I began to understand that we should not take what others say and do to heart (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: take sth to heart: để bụng, bận lòng). Or else, we tend to feel bad about ourselves and will never be able to live our life >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "others" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- My friend made a new best friend and would strut around (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: đi nghênh ngang) with her trying to make me jealous.
- She would gossip (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: bàn tán, tám chuyện) with all the other kids about me.
- I suddenly became an outcast (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: kẻ bị bỏ rơi) at school, thus, became utterly lonely and depressed. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: I also realized that bad things happen in life, and we cannot hide from them (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: trốn khỏi), so we should not dig ourselves into a hole (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: tự gây khó cho mình)
- Supporting idea:
- I eventually found a new best friend, and we’re still friends today.
- I have a more open personality, and I believe that this situation made me a stronger person.
- I can handle rejection now whenever it comes from and just keep rolling (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: tiếp tục bước đi) with a smile on my face.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: I began to understand that we should not take what others say and do to heart (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: take sth to heart: để bụng, bận lòng). Or else, we tend to feel bad about ourselves and will never be able to live our life >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "others" tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác:
- Nói về entrance exam:
- I want to talk about the time I was preparing for the university entrance exam, which until now is still the most important stage of my life. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "till" "untill" tiếng anh
- It actually happened 5 years ago, but the feeling was so intense that everything is still fresh in my memory.
- As you know, in Vietnam, the university entrance exam has always been considered the most important examination in anybody’s life, and mine was no exception. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: It was really a nerve-racking period of time when we were up to our eyes in assignments and revision)
- In my time, all students were required to sit for an exam that covered the knowledge of 3 full years in high school. It was too much for anyone to handle; the amount of things to learn was so enormous that I remembered having to pull all-nighters almost every day.
- In hindsight, it was not an enjoyable time, but definitely a precious memory to me. It was the first time I was ever involved in something that had such a huge impact on my life. Through this, I had an opportunity to have a closer look at my career orientation as well as my ability. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "enjoyable"
- Nói về friendship
- Though that time was hard to us all, as we had been under a lot of pressure to be able to be admitted by high-ranked high school, the friend among us helped all of us relieve stress, lift up our spirits and recharge our energy to make concerted efforts to get into our desired schools.
- Now, when we’re all grown-up and have to live a hectic life to make end meets, we still try to cement our relationship. Sometimes, we have a whale of a time in our reunions when we’re taking a trip down memory lanes about those good old days, when we were carefree and so close to each others. Those memories are the most beautiful things we have had together, which helps build up our long lasting friendship until now. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "relationship" tiếng anh
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