Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪ A ĐẾN Z CÁCH PHÂN TÍCH TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING VIỆT NAM (kèm bài được sửa của học sinh đạt 6.5 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích & Sửa đề "Describe an activity you usually do that wastes your time"IELTS SPEAKING
I. Đề bài
Describe an activity you usually do that wastes your time
You should say:
What it is
When you usually do it
Why you do it
And explain why you think it wastes your time
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn IDIOMS (thành ngữ) topic "TIME" IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào cue card để trả lời nhé:
- What it is
- Browsing social media apps on my phone - an awful that I usually squander a lot of time on / that I will try my best to get rid of >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "social media" IELTS
- When you usually do it
- Throughout the day I use my phone for hours without even noticing the time. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "throughout" tiếng anh
- In the middle of my work, I tend to take small breaks which turn into hours when I surf social networking sites
- Why you do it
- Check my newsfeed and keep me updated with the latest news and events >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh
- Keep in touch with my friends and family members
- Watch comedy videos and movies to unwind and reduce stress after some hours of work
- And explain why you think it wastes your time
- Main idea 1: It does not have many great benefits except for pure relaxation >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
- Supporting idea: I have to admit that most of the time I spend on social networking sites is for entertainment purposes
- Supporting idea: These platforms are bombarded with extremely tempting advertisements, and once I get on these sites to check anything, I end up wasting a lot of time. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt"advertising/advertisement/ads/advert
- Main idea 2: It distracts me from completing some important tasks of the day and affects my overall productivity
- Main idea 1: It does not have many great benefits except for pure relaxation >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Well, the habit I'm going to talk about today is probably one that many people can relate to - spending excessive time browsing social media apps on my phone. It's something I find myself doing far too often, and it's definitely a habit I'm determined to kick.
I usually find myself glued to my phone throughout the day, mindlessly scrolling through various social media platforms without even realizing how much time has passed. It's particularly bad during breaks at work; what starts as a quick check of my newsfeed or a brief chat with a friend often spirals into hours of endless scrolling.
Now, why do I do it? Well, there are a few reasons. Firstly, I use social media to keep myself updated with the latest news and events. It's also a convenient way to stay in touch with friends and family, especially those who live far away. And let's be honest, sometimes I just need a bit of mindless entertainment, like watching funny videos or memes to unwind after a long day.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
But despite these reasons, I can't ignore the fact that it's a colossal time-waster. Most of the time I spend on social media doesn't really have any significant benefits, apart from providing momentary relaxation. I often find myself getting sucked into endless scrolling sessions, bombarded with tempting advertisements that only serve to distract me further.
This habit seriously affects my productivity. It's far too easy to get lost in the virtual world of social media and neglect important tasks that need to be done. Instead of being productive and focused, I find myself procrastinating and putting off work because I'm too busy checking my notifications or scrolling through timelines.
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