Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Cách trả lời"Which one is more important, salary or job satisfaction?"IELTS SPEAKING PART 3

Câu hỏi: Which one is more important, salary or job satisfaction?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Job= vacancy, occupation, position
• Job Market = Labour Market...

Cùng xét gợi ý trả lời với IELTS TUTOR

• Personally, I do believe that job satisfaction more critical for many reasons 
  • Main idea 1: Firstly, if people don’t like what they do, it will be a torture for them, and I don’t believe that they can be persistent and productive under such a situation  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "torture" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Although salary is almost everyone’s concern when they get a job, how can they become excellent and improve themselves without their fondness for their job  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh

      • It’s a horrible experience when you are in a job where you’re not at all happy and honestly, you could have all the money in the world, you could buy anything you want, but at the end of the day you’re cribbing about your work.

    • Example: For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science.
  • Main idea 2: Secondly, doing what we like keeps us motivated and therefore leads to a career growth  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put salary on the first place
    • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Main idea 1: Money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs
  • Supporting idea: 
    • We all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education
    • Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If an employee is given a posh remuneration, he will be able to solidify his future, improve his lifestyle and facilitate those dependent on him in a better way)
    • If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves.
  • Example: Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt động từ "rise" & "increase" tiếng anh
• Main idea 2: High salaries are a way for a company to express its gratitude for a person’s experience or expertise 
  • Supporting idea: 
    • A higher salary is a way to show employees that they are valued
    • Employees will be much more invested in their jobs and in the company they work for if they feel valued by that company.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ"valued"tiếng anh
  • Example: 
• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý một vài ideas khác:
  • Main idea 1: High salaries are an incentive for others to work harder
  • Main idea 2: High salaries are important to entice people to do dangerous or unpleasant work 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Thông thường nếu trả lời theo 2 hướng đối lặp sẽ dùng bố cục On the one hand/On the other hand

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• It depends on individuals' goals when seeking employment
• On the one hand, for those who need a job for short-term financial gain, high salaries are prioritized. Actually, they may be in a situation where they require immediate financial support, such as paying off debts or covering basic living expenses, and a high salary can provide the necessary financial stability in the short term.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "prioritize" tiếng anh
• On the other hand, for those who seek employment for experience and knowledge, job satisfaction is paramount simply because it provides the opportunity to enjoy work, learn and grow in a field of interest. In my own situation as a college student, I prioritize finding a job that offers good satisfaction and opportunities to explore various job types and gain practical knowledge.

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